Improve the English phrasing of new messages

8 files changed, 26 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/family.php b/family.php
index 05d8d52d66..dd66e498ec 100644
--- a/family.php
+++ b/family.php
@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@ if ($controller->family && $controller->family->canDisplayName()) {
 	print_header($controller->getPageTitle());
 	if ($controller->family->isMarkedDeleted()) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> this deletion.', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You should review the deletion and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> it.', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted, but the deletion needs to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  The deletion will need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif (find_updated_record($controller->family->getXref(), WT_GED_ID)!==null) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> the changes.', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  You should review the changes and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> them.', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->family->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed, but the changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  The changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif ($controller->accept_success) {
 		echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('The changes have been accepted.'), '</p>';
diff --git a/individual.php b/individual.php
index 5d694f41d7..efcf9fb162 100644
--- a/individual.php
+++ b/individual.php
@@ -41,15 +41,15 @@ if ($controller->indi && $controller->indi->canDisplayName()) {
 	print_header($controller->getPageTitle());
 	if ($controller->indi->isMarkedDeleted()) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> this deletion.', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You should review the deletion and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> it.', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted, but the deletion needs to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  The deletion will need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif (find_updated_record($controller->indi->getXref(), WT_GED_ID)!==null) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> the changes.', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  You should review the changes and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> them.', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->indi->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed, but the changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  The changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif ($controller->accept_success) {
 		echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('The changes have been accepted.'), '</p>';
diff --git a/library/WT/Gedcom/Tag.php b/library/WT/Gedcom/Tag.php
index 6b640e112b..ec3154b148 100644
--- a/library/WT/Gedcom/Tag.php
+++ b/library/WT/Gedcom/Tag.php
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ class WT_Gedcom_Tag {
 		case 'NOTE': return /* I18N: gedcom tag NOTE */ WT_I18N::translate('Note');
 		case 'NPFX': return /* I18N: gedcom tag NPFX */ WT_I18N::translate('Name prefix');
 		case 'NSFX': return /* I18N: gedcom tag NSFX */ WT_I18N::translate('Name suffix');
-		case 'OBJE': return /* I18N: gedcom tag OBJE */ WT_I18N::translate('Multimedia object');
+		case 'OBJE': return /* I18N: gedcom tag OBJE */ WT_I18N::translate('Media object');
 		case 'OCCU': return /* I18N: gedcom tag OCCU */ WT_I18N::translate('Occupation');
 		case 'OCCU:AGNC': return WT_I18N::translate('Employer');
 		case 'ORDI': return /* I18N: gedcom tag ORDI */ WT_I18N::translate('Ordinance');
diff --git a/mediaviewer.php b/mediaviewer.php
index 682ed588f8..ed153f4b10 100644
--- a/mediaviewer.php
+++ b/mediaviewer.php
@@ -36,15 +36,15 @@ if ($controller->mediaobject && $controller->mediaobject->canDisplayName()) {
 	print_header($controller->getPageTitle());
 	if ($controller->mediaobject->isMarkedDeleted()) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> this deletion.', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You should review the deletion and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> it.', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted, but the deletion needs to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  The deletion will need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif (find_updated_record($controller->mediaobject->getXref(), WT_GED_ID)!==null) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> the changes.', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  You should review the changes and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> them.', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->mediaobject->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed, but the changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  The changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif ($controller->accept_success) {
 		echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('The changes have been accepted.'), '</p>';
diff --git a/modules_v2/review_changes/module.php b/modules_v2/review_changes/module.php
index ff196d0a26..912ad1fa40 100644
--- a/modules_v2/review_changes/module.php
+++ b/modules_v2/review_changes/module.php
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ class review_changes_WT_Module extends WT_Module implements WT_Module_Block {
 						case 'SOUR':
 						case 'OBJE':
 							$content.=$block ? '<br />' : ' ';
-							$content.='<a href="'.$record->getHtmlUrl().'">'.WT_I18N::translate('View the changes.').'</a>';
+							$content.='<a href="'.$record->getHtmlUrl().'">'.WT_I18N::translate('View the changes').'</a>';
 							break;
 						}
 						$content.='<br />';
diff --git a/note.php b/note.php
index a995c56da0..018484ee6a 100644
--- a/note.php
+++ b/note.php
@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@ if ($controller->note && $controller->note->canDisplayName()) {
 	print_header($controller->getPageTitle());
 	if ($controller->note->isMarkedDeleted()) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> this deletion.', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You should review the deletion and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> it.', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted, but the deletion needs to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  The deletion will need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif (find_updated_record($controller->note->getXref(), WT_GED_ID)!==null) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> the changes.', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  You should review the changes and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> them.', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->note->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed, but the changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  The changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif ($controller->accept_success) {
 		echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('The changes have been accepted.'), '</p>';
diff --git a/repo.php b/repo.php
index aa42a9ae9e..2f6c6f5169 100644
--- a/repo.php
+++ b/repo.php
@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@ if ($controller->repository && $controller->repository->canDisplayName()) {
 	print_header($controller->getPageTitle());
 	if ($controller->repository->isMarkedDeleted()) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> this deletion.', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You should review the deletion and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> it.', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted, but the deletion needs to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  The deletion will need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif (find_updated_record($controller->repository->getXref(), WT_GED_ID)!==null) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> the changes.', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  You should review the changes and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> them.', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->repository->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed, but the changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  The changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif ($controller->accept_success) {
 		echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('The changes have been accepted.'), '</p>';
diff --git a/source.php b/source.php
index 84e64ea978..cfbee428d3 100644
--- a/source.php
+++ b/source.php
@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@ if ($controller->source && $controller->source->canDisplayName()) {
 	print_header($controller->getPageTitle());
 	if ($controller->source->isMarkedDeleted()) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> this deletion.', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  You should review the deletion and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> it.', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted, but the deletion needs to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been deleted.  The deletion will need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif (find_updated_record($controller->source->getXref(), WT_GED_ID)!==null) {
 		if (WT_USER_CAN_ACCEPT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed.  You can <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> the changes.', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  You should review the changes and then <a href="%1$s">accept</a> or <a href="%2$s">reject</a> them.', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=accept', $controller->source->getHtmlUrl().'&amp;action=undo'), '</p>';
 		} elseif (WT_USER_CAN_EDIT) {
-			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been changed, but the changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
+			echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('This record has been edited.  The changes need to be reviewed by a moderator.'), '</p>';
 		}
 	} elseif ($controller->accept_success) {
 		echo '<p class="ui-state-highlight">', WT_I18N::translate('The changes have been accepted.'), '</p>';